Magic

Magic
(December 3, 2009)

The flames leap at ancient stones
Enchanted flames burn the color of amber
Burn with enchantment
Dance on the flames with me

The flames leap at ancient stones
Enchanted flames burn the color of amber
Burn with enchantment
Dance on the flames with me

The flames leap at ancient stones
Enchanted flames burn the color of amber
Burn with enchantment
Dance on the flames with me


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8 comments:

  1. Your writing seems much more tangible lately...Like love is being served fresh upon your plate :)

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  2. Very nice. Thanks for visiting my blog and follow. I enjoyed your poems, they are very artistic!

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  3. Dear Charity, loved the poem!

    Very creative and magical the stones, fire, dance that you have woven in tapestry of your poem, lovely piece. Thank you for the magic you share.

    Much enjoyed reading,
    Zuzanna

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  4. This poem is so descriptive. I can see the stones aflame and brave souls walking on them!

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  5. I am always up for a little magic! I hope you are having a wonderful week!

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  6. FishHawk-

    This piece is entitled Magic. I have repeated the first lines thrice, thus creating a repetitive sing-song "chanting" countenance for my piece. The overall effect is enchanting. And there you have the magic. :)

    I can see it's effect on you, as you think it an actual enchantment!!!!! :)

    -C

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  7. Hi Charity, as always your poem is beautiful. I like the imagery with fire and heat, very passionate :)

    I have an award for you on my blog today, I hope it makes you happy :)

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