Undone




Undone
(November 27, 2009)

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Falling
In
Slow
Motion
Onto
The
Ground

I
Come
Undone
For
You


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13 comments:

  1. Charity, your poem and the video both touched my heart.

    Off to bed feel very warm inside...goodness, it's 2AM...too late for this "senior" citizen to be still at the computer!

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  2. Just checking in what a great way to begin my busy afternoon.

    Dorothy from grammology
    grammology.com

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  3. Hi Charity,

    Loved your poem and thank you for sharing your lovely work.

    I hope that you are having a great week

    Hugs
    Carolyn

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  4. Great poem, Charity! Of course I'll like your book :). I also enjoyed the video, I'm a big fan of Moby — and of this sort of animations!

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  5. I love your poem. It's beautiful.

    Thanks for the visit. :)

    A Simple Life

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  6. This was fun, short and sweet! The animation was cute to watch too! Have a great day Bells!

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  7. Your very gifted. I enjoyed finding you this morning. Looking forward to being a follower
    Maggie

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  8. Undone for you, huh? Well, I've been undone every time I fall in love. I guess that is love, blind and unexplainable.

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  9. Liza- Thank you very much! And thank you for your visit and for your comment! :)

    Muse- Thank you for the sunshine you have brought me! I shall cherish it! :)

    Sares- I love how you call me "Bells" ... !!! :D

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  10. I like your poem better than the video. It's simple and beautiful. And typed in an artistic manner. The video was cute, though. And the music fit.

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  11. Love it, Charity. So playful and light-hearted. Is that what you're like? It appears so. Reminds me a little of this poem by Takuboku:

    Like a rock
    sliding down
    the hill
    I reached
    today

    (Similar form, different subject)

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