We Are The Angels

We Are The Angels
(November 30, 2009)

You make me
Nude
You make me
Brokendown

You eat my
Soul
My soul that’s
Raw
There’s no other
Me
But me that’s
Raw

And burning

You pull me
Out
Out through my
Eyes

The day is
Dark
Days dark and
Evil

We soar in
Flight
Soaring through the
Darkness

I see the
Lightning
The reflections of
Lightning

In your eyes

And I feel
Thunder
Thunder here inside
Me

You make me
Thunder
You make me
Nude

Your palm in
Mine
Your hot palm
Sweats

Bound by the
Heavens
Sealed as burning
Lights

We are the angels


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15 comments:

  1. Interesting poem. I always have to stop and think about what it means. That's a good thing, I don't want everything deliver to me so easily. :-)

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  2. That is quite intense, you have written it with passion from within, so there must be someone to inspire it.
    Well done.

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  3. Donald S- Yes, it IS intense. Fire from the soul. That's what it is. :)

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  4. I find this poem sexy. It's the "nude" part that's got me, I think. or am I just being literal? hmmm. (going back to my cave to ponder...)

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  5. Lynn- This makes me feel sexy, too. :) I felt sensual while I was writing it. :)

    Flames, flames, fire and heat...

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  6. perhaps a modern interpretation of the Bible's Songs of Solomon ? :) love...a spiritual thing and a physical one as well.

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  7. Who are we spiritual or physical...we'll only know when we pass to the next world which is eternal...great thoughts..

    Dorothy form grammology
    grammology.com

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  8. As we are said to be one-winged angles, only able to fly while embracing eachother, this was for sure of joy to read.

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  9. "days dark and evil" and "bound by the heavens" ....just like life. I love it :))

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  10. Very provocative Bells! I hope all is well in your world and I thank you for the new nickname, Sareski it is!

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  11. Hi Charity,

    Interesting poem and one does have to think about this.
    Also loved your pretty flowers in the previous post, how gorgeous.

    I hope that you are having a wonderful week
    Hugs
    Carolyn

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  12. Dorothy- I think that we should know now (who we are spiritually and physically) that's also why we're here. :) We're not to wait until we pass from this earth to find this out. :) Oh...what a waste of precious time that would be-no- we find out now, Dorothy. And eternity- it's not something that we wait for- it's our eternal souls! We feel it, we speak it, we are it. :)

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  13. ρομπερτ - yes- when we embrace another- two wings made into one and we can fly- :) Thank you, for your visit and for your comment. :)

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  14. M S- thank you. :) I am happy that you love my writing. :)

    Sares- Hello Sareski :) Yes, very provocative, as I feel it is, also :)

    Draffin (Carolyn) - I am not sure if to advise one to think about the things that I write, as I do not think whilst I write. I feel. And I write. :) So... I would advise one to feel what I write instead of think what I write. :)

    Funny, as the title of my blog is "Thoughts" ...hahah :D

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  15. M S- thank you. :) I am happy that you love my writing. :)

    Sares- Hello Sareski :) Yes, very provocative, as I feel it is, also :)

    Draffin (Carolyn) - I am not sure if to advise one to think about the things that I write, as I do not think whilst I write. I feel. And I write. :) So... I would advise one to feel what I write instead of think what I write. :)

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