You're Not Here

You’re Not Here
(March 22, 2010)

I can hear
My own cries
Bouncing off the
Dark walls of
Where I am
Somewhere there where
You are not


© 2010 C. JoyBell C. All rights reserved.

19 comments:

  1. This is a sad poem that touches the heart.

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  2. I can't remember when I last hurt that way, but it has been a long time, so thank god for that! Wish that I was reading this poem then, it would help express some of the hurt eh? Smiles.

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  3. Have you been hurt at some time in your life little angel, if so I hope the pain has all gone and the words you are writing are only from memory.

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  4. oh! it is so sad. i read it somewhere...you will never know happiness until you have truly love. you'll never know what pain really is until you lost it( something to that effect)...and i guess it is true.i don't know if its relevant to your poem but its how i can only describe the feeling reaching out on me reading this powerful and heartfelt piece.

    eng

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  5. Made me read more than twice. A brilliant play of words. Chapeau !

    Please have a wonderful Tuesday.

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  6. Sounds so very lonely. I hope these days you are feeling nothing but love and happiness sweet Bells!

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  7. this is sad... I'll go read your happy ones to destress. :)

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  8. Hey, Charity,

    Just dropping by to say hello. This blogging world is an intense place, tee hee.

    Take care,

    Zub.

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  9. Hi Charity,

    This is so sad, and a heartfelt piece.
    Sending a hug to you

    Carolyn

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  10. wow. so much in so few words...

    on a lighter note, there is a bar in chapel hill called he's not here...

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  11. RNSANE~ Thank you for your visit and for your comment. And I am glad that your heart has been touched.

    Sagacity~ Yes, I wish you had my writing to read back then, too.

    Donald S.~ Thank you very much, Donald, for your kind thoughts towards me.

    Eng~ Thank you so much for your visit and for your comment, and I am glad that my writing has touched you and reached out to you in a powerful and heartfelt way.

    ρομπερτ~ I am glad that you have read this more than twice!

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  12. Sares~ You are so lovely and sweet, and for you I am very thankful, Sareski!! :)

    Lynn~ I am sorry my writing has stressed you, but then I am very glad that you search for my other writings to de-stress you. :)

    Zub~ We live in an intense existence, Zub. :)

    Carolyn (Draffin Bears) ~ Thank you very much for your hug, Carolyn, thank you very much for your visits and for your comments, I appreciate you always.

    Brian M.~ Thank you for your visit and for your comment, Brian M. , I find it rather.... mysterious... how there is a "bar" on "chapel hill" called "he's not here" ...hmmm....

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  13. Beautiful as always. Heart wrenching too. I don't think you can love and not have that happen at least once in your life.

    It seems almost wrong to change the subject. I finally got to passing on the Happy 101 Award today that you gave me. And as a thank you for all you've done for me lately, I passed it back to you. LOL You don't need to do anything with it. It's just a thank you in appreciation for your kindness.

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  14. Hi Charity,

    I must have missed the post you wrote to me, where you said you were having a drought there. So sorry and sounds really bad for the poor old cows and animals.
    We have not had rain for about 4 months and it is pretty dry here too. So bad, that we have had to buy 4 tanker loads of water to fill our tank, this Summer. We will both have to do a rain dance.

    Hugs
    Carolyn

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  15. Thank you so much, Mary Anne! You are so special to me!!!!!!! :) And thank you also, for your insight on my writing here!!!!!! :)

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  16. Carolyn~ Yes, let us now join hands and do our very own special raindance!!!!!! :D :D Oh wouldn't it be just lovely????? I am so sure that the stars would all fall down!!!!!! :D :D :D Just for us!

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